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Nice to have a happy ending for a change

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Anndrais mac Choluim's avatar

Loved it. Though I'd have liked more from Hayley during her low point on the . I imagine the experience would have cast more of a perspective on her whole life. But it's still good; the tension builds well. I just felt the climax was a bit underplayed.

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